The writer balances emotional drama with thriller elements extremely well and delivers an intriguing story that keeps the reader engaged throughout.

— Industrial Scripts

Throughout the script there is a strong sense of setting, place, and driving character desire as the writer deftly builds the emerging conflict through a vivid dynamic of character interactions.

— Rocliffe

This sharp, stylish script is purely cinematic and marks the impressive talents of the writer. It delivers on every level and culminates in a brilliant and shocking climax with a dizzying amount of twists and turns.

— Roz Kidd

It can be hard to tell a story that functions both as a dramatic piece while also feeling like a popcorn horror movie, and the writer does an impressive job at balancing on that wire.

— Hollywood Script Express

The diversity angles in the script are fantastic. There are so many different characters and levels of people, and it looks like our world, which gives it a great sense of authenticity.

— ISA

One area where this script sets itself apart is in its impressive and cinematic stylistic sensibilities. Action flows from one sequence to the next, seeming to rise off the pages with a sense of genuine depth, dimension, and texture.

— ScriptShark

The structure was professionally handled, with great pacing throughout, producing a sleek and fast-moving thriller that’s sure to enrapture any reader thanks to the writer’s undeniable talent for constructing a tense scene.

— WeScreenplay

The writer’s dialogue teaches us effectively about the central characters, clearly differentiating between their personalities and giving us a sense of who they are in a naturalistic and authentic way which helps the script maintain a grounded, realistic tone.

— The Black List

In the protagonist, the writer has created the type of character that can attract serious talent – he’s complex yet endearing and has a compelling inner conflict that manifests itself expertly throughout the many twists and turns of the compelling narrative.

— Story Pros

The writer handles the science fiction aspect particularly well – not only were the technological advancements fresh and creative but the appropriate scientific supporting material was there to help it feel like a possibility instead of an improbability.

— AFilmWriter.com

The writer does a stellar job of exploring solid themes about trust and control and maintains a consistently eerie and foreboding tone with frightening, yet brilliant visual imagery.

— Terri Zinner

The writer delivers a clever and highly cinematic thriller with visceral imagery and intelligent use of visual metaphor to dramatize the protagonist’s battle with his past.

— Screenplay Readers

The tone and mood of this script complement the horror genre well, with a mixture of gory, suspenseful and intense dramatic scenes that are well-crafted and will keep audiences on the edge of their seats.

— Hollywood Script Express

The witty, sharp dialogue feels completely authentic and unique to each character and helps them stand out, and the writer’s careful use of subtext elevates it to the next level.

— Scriptapalooza

This is a highly effective script with a story that has those heavy themes and big moments that push the envelope and fits well with the current market’s needs and a concept that can make people pay attention.

— ISA

Ambitious, vibrantly visual, impressive in scope, and deeply cinematic in its storytelling sensibilities, this script charts out a vast sci-fi action adventure that seems to channel the tonal spirit and flavor of a blend of predecessors like Battle: Los Angeles, Independence Day, and even Starship Troopers.

— ScriptShark

This is a well-structured enjoyable thriller with a fresh supernatural angle and plethora of satisfying twists and turns that takes the audience on an engaging journey into some dark places but deposits them safely back into the light.

— BlueCat Screenplay Competition

The script is a fast and fun modern thriller with its sights set on deeper themes to match the action and suspense. It’s a cool and unpredictable ride that has a great chance of success if produced thanks to the clear commercial appeal.

— WeScreenplay

The writer knows how to deliver and balance some very well-executed gripping action sequences with quieter scenes of drama.

— Austin Film Festival

There are so many aspects of the script that are unique and original, not least the characters who all have very specific and different personalities and original voices. There is a certain sense of engagement with them and nobody is interchangeable.

— ISA

The horror scene pacing in this script is killer! The action reads quick and matches the speed it would be translated to screen. Of particular note are the suspenseful moments that quickly switch between characters’ points of view, which suit the genre and story well.

— Hollywood Script Express

The script is thrilling and exciting. Punchy, readable, fast when it needs to be, and thoughtful when the story requires a more introspective beat. The writer does an excellent job at raising the stakes and balancing the many narrative strands.

— Industrial Scripts

The writer handled the intense scary moments exceptionally well, delivering many unique thrills that vastly deviated from the usual movie tropes and didn’t rely on cheap jump scares.

— AFilmWriter.com

Not only is the dialogue continually witty, but the character development of the two leads is so strong that their contrasting behavior helps us to sympathize with both of them for completely different reasons.

— Roz Kidd

The writer’s careful construction and ultimate reveal of the big twist in this script is REALLY smart and original.

— Scriptapalooza

The writer deserves great credit for setting up a terrifically original futuristic world in a subtle and realistic way.

— Screenplay Readers

The tone is a good mix between genuine, scary, and occasionally funny. The writer balances these aspects well, and knows when to pull back on the horror for a more light-hearted scene.

— Hollywood Script Express

The writer presents as an original and compelling psychological thriller with a plot that thrusts the audience into an absorbing mystery and really delivers some genuinely terrifying moments.

— Terri Zinner

This script leverages a vivid and deeply cinematic style in service of forging compelling action sequences and an entertaining overall impact.

— ScriptShark

The building suspense is palpable and the writer does a masterful job of drawing a reader into the unfolding story and weaving the script’s many threads into a cohesive narrative.

— ISA

The writer’s voice naturally brings levity to the scenes, both through the action and the dialogue and by using colloquial language and rhetorical questions in the prose, brings us into the characters’ perspectives and invites us to a deeper level of engagement with them and the story.

— Hollywood Script Express

The writer clearly knows their craft and has a real knack for story structure, demonstrating a natural talent for pacing and foreshadowing that result in some wonderful payoffs throughout.

— WeScreenplay

One of the highlights of this script was the dialogue. Not only did it feel effortless and natural, but it helped give the characters life and differentiate one from another.

— AFilmWriter.com

The script is well structured with exciting tentpoles moments and dynamic prose that translates well to the fast-paced nature of the project. The writer’s style is effective in keeping the action flowing compellingly and the reader drawn to the page.

— Hollywood Script Express

The story adopts a natural, seemingly almost effortless sense of rhythm and flow, allowing it to feel easy to imagine making the leap to the big screen.

— ScriptShark

The characters are well drawn and their dialogue is effective and distinct. The world the writer has created feels possible, accessible, and each page makes you want to read the next one – it’s thoroughly engaging.

— Industrial Scripts

A unique premise in which tropes of a Dystopian narrative are expertly conceived by the writer who subtly and intricately suggests a near-future world without overstating and portraying a “techno-universe”.

— Industrial Scripts

This script presents a compelling and novel twist on the heist movie which by its nature can be complex and confusing but here the author has a distinct voice which lends itself well to the genre and succeeds in keeping readers in the loop and engaged throughout.

— Hollywood Script Express

The writer clearly understands the genre and how to craft escalating suspense that really works on the page that makes the tension pop in all the right places.

— ISA

The script is compelling and demonstrates the writer’s ability to provide for the genre and deliver authentic characters and a fun and lively read.

— ISA

The tone comes across as highly authentic and grounded with a lightly comic twist that helps endear us to the small cast of characters. Narrative clarity is another strong element of the tone, never straying too far into ambiguity or diffuse subtext. Even in the most dramatic or comedic moments, the character’s choices feel believable.

— Hollywood Script Express

I really enjoyed the writer’s subtle weaving of visually evocative motifs throughout the script that help guide us toward the final haunting reveal.

— WeScreenplay

The writer’s dialogue is natural and authentic and reflects the personality of each character with nice subtext and insight which subtly conveys the story’s theme about the need for human connection in a world that focuses on technology.

— Terri Zinner

The script offers a fun, fast-paced, driving story that pulses from one beat to the other and has a clear understanding of causality and progress, and the rich way in which the stakes continue to escalate is exciting.

— Industrial Scripts

The writer employs a number of inventive conceptual anchors throughout the story which create the foundations for a vast, sprawling sci-fi action piece that is populated by compelling scientific inventions, believable characters, and strong action dynamics at every turn.

— ScriptShark

This is an entertaining and absorbing piece featuring distinctive characters and an engaging plot. Humour is used effectively throughout to endear us to the characters and keep us captivated as the various settings and storylines are established.

— Hollywood Script Express

The structure of the story is brilliant – very straight forward but clever and engaging.

— Roz Kidd

A smoothly flowing, vivid command of its action sequences and descriptive prose brings the world of the story to life with an impressive degree of texture and detail, while solid dialogue and narrative choices similarly benefit the sense of accessibility and entertainment value throughout the story.

— ScriptShark

The writer has a deep understanding of the sci-fi genre and a passion for executing grand and imaginative action sequences that deliver on every level.

— Hollywood Script Express

The tense, linear plotting was effective and created an urgency for the protagonist in each moment that kept things really unpredictable in a satisfying way. It was rare that you could easily guess where things would go next.

— WeScreenplay

The script is immersive and intense and the writer has a talented voice well-suited for the thriller/horror genre.

— Hollywood Script Express

The writer delivered a clear escalation of tension that helped keep the story moving along at a swift pace and provided the perfect amount of compelling entertainment to keep the reader’s attention focused.

— AFilmWriter.com

The dialogue of this script was masterfully done. It read quickly, authentically, and effectively represented all the disparate characters’ personalities and motives.

— Hollywood Script Express

The clues and the misdirects make for an engaging story that draws us in and keeps us guessing, and the writer brings them all together in a way that is satisfying and feels earned.

— WeScreenplay

The writer successfully manages to hook the reader from the start and makes this pilot script entertaining to read – combining economical efficiency with a playful interest in details, and arousing excitement for subsequent episodes with its dramatic climax.

— Hollywood Script Express

The script presents with an original voice and creative artistic style which is extremely captivating and could make for a compelling and unnerving marketable independent thriller.

— Terri Zinner

Fast-paced and action-packed, this script takes readers on a wild ride and keeps them engaged until the final twist.

— Hollywood Script Express

The writer has delivered a wildly original and thought-provoking sci-fi script with great world-building, an endearing protagonist, unexpected plot twists and a plethora of poignant themes.

— WeScreenplay